Nice addition of environmental elements in almost all of your sketch's but the old lady looking at the book is my fav. but i can't help but think that if she was reading the book her eyelids would be closed more. maybe something to think about.
Hey again! haha =] uhm, I'm liking these. They very active. Your people all seem to be doing something. BUT! Your proportions are off on some. Like the guy on the computer.... his head is tiny hahaa at least compared to like the size of his legs. And then also watch the poses you draw them in. The guy in the chair with one leg over the other... I'm pretty sure his leg is broken haha =] My favorite thing is the hottie in the top left corner of the 2nd image ;]
Tyler, These have a good quality of integrating the environment around the characters but I think the foundation of the gesture if off in these, to varying degrees. Work on the overlapping forms of a figure setting in space correctly, as well as variety in line weight. Always stay loose with your line. It seems to slow down in places here.
Nice addition of environmental elements in almost all of your sketch's but the old lady looking at the book is my fav. but i can't help but think that if she was reading the book her eyelids would be closed more. maybe something to think about.
ReplyDeleteHey again! haha =] uhm, I'm liking these. They very active. Your people all seem to be doing something. BUT! Your proportions are off on some. Like the guy on the computer.... his head is tiny hahaa at least compared to like the size of his legs. And then also watch the poses you draw them in. The guy in the chair with one leg over the other... I'm pretty sure his leg is broken haha =] My favorite thing is the hottie in the top left corner of the 2nd image ;]
ReplyDeleteTyler,
ReplyDeleteThese have a good quality of integrating the environment around the characters but I think the foundation of the gesture if off in these, to varying degrees. Work on the overlapping forms of a figure setting in space correctly, as well as variety in line weight. Always stay loose with your line. It seems to slow down in places here.