Tyler, These drawings have a wonderful looseness and fluid style to them. Please continue to work in this manner. Make more accurate decisions describing the figure as you create the drawings. The drawings definitely get better as the class proceeded. Pages 3 and 4 are the strongest. Avoid filling in shapes with lines. A scribbly line over a solid gesture detracts from it. Lines for patterns (coat, page 4) are a better indicator. Also, use line to describe form - not color or tone. Good work.
Tyler, What I find enjoyable about this drawing, is your mark making. I agree with Patrick, when he said you "have a wonderful looseness and fluid style."
Tyler,
ReplyDeleteThese drawings have a wonderful looseness and fluid style to them. Please continue to work in this manner. Make more accurate decisions describing the figure as you create the drawings.
The drawings definitely get better as the class proceeded. Pages 3 and 4 are the strongest.
Avoid filling in shapes with lines. A scribbly line over a solid gesture detracts from it. Lines for patterns (coat, page 4) are a better indicator. Also, use line to describe form - not color or tone.
Good work.
Tyler,
ReplyDeleteWhat I find enjoyable about this drawing, is your mark making. I agree with Patrick, when he said you "have a wonderful looseness and fluid style."