Tyler, Solid work, mostly. Continue to work loosely and lightly. I love the sense of gesture you create with your walking figures - and the foreshortening is good on the 3rd page's seated figure. The last drawing is a good start but seems a little top heavy in line weight and shaky with the straight lines. Make a ghost gesture to memorize the physical act of making the stroke - then put the pen down. It should improve your straight marks.
Tyler,
ReplyDeleteSolid work, mostly. Continue to work loosely and lightly. I love the sense of gesture you create with your walking figures - and the foreshortening is good on the 3rd page's seated figure.
The last drawing is a good start but seems a little top heavy in line weight and shaky with the straight lines. Make a ghost gesture to memorize the physical act of making the stroke - then put the pen down. It should improve your straight marks.