Tyler, Overall, pretty good work. I like that your starting lightly and loosely. I also like that you are capturing poses that are dynamic; have overlapping forms and a sense of weight shift - if only slightly. You have also created (or enhanced) some interesting character. For curly hair, work to the contour and indicate the curls slightly. It can distract from the rest of the drawing. Continue trying to make more accurate marks that sharpen limb bending (sharp in inside of limb - last drawing gets rubbery) and hands.
Tyler,
ReplyDeleteOverall, pretty good work. I like that your starting lightly and loosely. I also like that you are capturing poses that are dynamic; have overlapping forms and a sense of weight shift - if only slightly. You have also created (or enhanced) some interesting character.
For curly hair, work to the contour and indicate the curls slightly. It can distract from the rest of the drawing.
Continue trying to make more accurate marks that sharpen limb bending (sharp in inside of limb - last drawing gets rubbery) and hands.
Good work.